spanish tile & winter cries

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Open Poetry #34

spanish tile & winter cries

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-01-08 03:27 PM

spanish tile & winter cries

i bit my tongue;
i know-- because
part of my voice, fell
to the floor

the girl wearing a felt hat slipped
--then thanked me
©sdt'05

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2005-01-08 03:48 PM

Ow! Hate it when that happens - love how you describe it - at least my interpretation of what I see - had to grin

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2005-01-08 04:06 PM

Very nice. Pithy poetry...

JL

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

3 posted 2005-01-11 02:02 AM

Know that feeling.

:-)

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