Open Poetry #34 |
In that Moment |
Sunshine
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It was all could be done in that moment trying to look past the fantasy into the beyond, eager for best, trusting luck hoping that some good fortune would guide my eye I knew, somewhere, their home was up there but the brilliance of this moment blinded me, so faith took over, and then I snapped… Noting sure angel’s aura All's right in sun’s time Warming nests, squirrels napping They’ll work to eat, soon enough Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Martie
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Posts 28049California |
Karilea/sissie How lovely!!!! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
What an amazing photograph - some moments are like that - Enjoyed this - Susan Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
There are moments, and there are moments...... .....you've caught both here. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Ratleader
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Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
There....does that make up for my Clinton joke? ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful pictures and words to match. believe in what your heart feels... |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so great made me think of little kids standing underneath that tree, dreaming up what could be in that nest... |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like the poem and the picture (; Juju |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
BEAUTIFUL!!!! In the midst of winter, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that picture, reminds me of my view while laying down underneath the tree in my back yard, looking up and the write...you've captured the moment well |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
SUNSHINE YOU PEN YOUR PICTURES VERY WELL MY DEAR. THANKS FOR ALLOWING US TO SARE YOUR THOUGHTS THIS MORNING. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
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Now counting starred points, Noting sure angel’s aura All's right in sun’s time ============================= And you would know wouldnt you. ya know too, Im loving that pic. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Momemt captured most beautifully in your words Hope |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful Kari, both your words and the image. You always captured the moment so beautifully. Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
What an amazing moment in time you share with us...To feel your words so strongly is to enter the moment with you...Wonderful... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Amazing write. But made me hungry for roasted hot nuts. Enjoyed. JL |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
This is just SO beautiful Karilea! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Ericc Member Elite
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Great, great write. Eric |
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Midnitesun
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Posts 28647Gaia |
*starred points* yes |
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Denise
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So lovely, Kari! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Sure glad that this got bumped back up, I would have missed a beautiful poem.. Very nice, picture and words... _________ice/ford ><> |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh, but yes they will...just as you are... giving us tidbits of words to dine on and store for a winter's day. |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
This was so beautiful, Sunshine! Thank you for posting it today...it helped lighten my heart. God bless... Becka |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Beautiful pic and poem, lady. Looks mighty cold in your neck o' the woods, but hey, it's raining cats and dogs here! Corinne |
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MGROVES
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Posts 3802california |
gorgeous |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, everyone... we're still cold, and quite icy... so the picture remains... |
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