Open Poetry #34 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
I knocked at the door of the man with the deformity I should have known by the wormwood over steel that there were illusions behind and that somewhere there he was really a perfect jesus dressed up imperfectly so my humility would become compassion __________ dark |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
D- compassion - ah a word I love - and I love this - it rings to lessons I learned as a youth and stories told - Good Afternoon - ![]() Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are that... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I do like that thing you do. Thanks for this gem (and thanks for the read) |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What's more you just never know do you? Nice read. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS There are so many times that you say things just right. This is one of them. ![]() |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
very nice writing |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Too many times it has been the one dressed in imperfection that has saved me from myself. ![]() This was wonderful.. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how do you do that? Whatever it is...you do it so masterfully?????? Great write DS...thank you for sharing Morning ![]() |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
love those specs you wear |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
compassion yes ![]() very much...enjoying |
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