Open Poetry #34 |
ebionite genre |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I knocked at the door of the man with the deformity I should have known by the wormwood over steel that there were illusions behind and that somewhere there he was really a perfect jesus dressed up imperfectly so my humility would become compassion __________ dark |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
D- compassion - ah a word I love - and I love this - it rings to lessons I learned as a youth and stories told - Good Afternoon - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are that... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I do like that thing you do. Thanks for this gem (and thanks for the read) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What's more you just never know do you? Nice read. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS There are so many times that you say things just right. This is one of them. |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
very nice writing |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Too many times it has been the one dressed in imperfection that has saved me from myself. This was wonderful.. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how do you do that? Whatever it is...you do it so masterfully?????? Great write DS...thank you for sharing Morning |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
love those specs you wear |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
compassion yes very much...enjoying |
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