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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-06 06:47 PM

before the leaves leaf
into finger prints on
onto the snow black
asphalt drifting
from a careful wind

to the evening
of night and day
there at the seem
to be seam
of sundown rising

I hurry my linger
to lounge silently loud
at the windows side
of a glassless sky
and does it bother you

me bothering to
address your undressing
with the cellophane
dress of my suggestions
and would you mind

the mine of my imagining

_______________

dark

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-01-06 06:51 PM

who could possibly mind....your mind....imagining..

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

2 posted 2005-01-06 06:52 PM

I love this one! I don't think there is one that you have written, I didn't like. Your an inspiration.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2005-01-06 06:59 PM

I like it.

I'm sorry their wasn't a cartoon to watch as I read it.

A Disney CD perhaps.

Dave

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-01-06 07:00 PM

Playing on your words...
lovely...

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-01-06 08:48 PM

Got my hard hat on - lamp lit - tools in hand, rope taut - ready to do some mining - am certain that imagination holds many gems and jewels - who could ever mind your mine

Hugs D - enjoyed this greatly - think I'll head soon into my imagination chamber and paint some pretty pictures -

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2005-01-07 07:30 AM

what a lovely morning read...like the first light of day...tipping it's hat and whispering a smiling Good Morning...this was gentle and pure...loving

Morning my fellow poet, and how are we doing today.

Have an incredible Friday and weekend ahead

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2005-01-07 07:37 AM

yes...good read

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2005-01-07 09:22 AM

would I mind??

lol.
what do you think? Oh, you do know how to make us smile and this being Friday and all
it definately makes the day!

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

9 posted 2005-01-08 01:52 AM

"I hurry my linger
to lounge silently loud
at the windows side
of a glassless sky
and does it bother you

me bothering to
address your undressing
with the cellophane
dress of my suggestions
and would you mind

the mine of my imagining"

oh yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2005-01-08 01:19 PM

DS

"from a careful wind"

Wonderful!

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

11 posted 2005-01-08 11:32 PM

Great write! I love the new pic!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2005-01-09 10:34 AM

enjoyed

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