Open Poetry #34 |
Never (A)stray |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Never (A)stray Feelings between the layers of indecision a resting place, for hesitancy lighting the candles for stolen moments to wick the fibers of my being. Petals crumble in the wavering, a hand open below, to catch the fragments. No title before these eyes that dry their tears in thought shreds. Just heat escaping the vows of yesteryear trickling to those spots where warmth is needed, where the living sigh, where death is held at arm's length and nothing changes. Tormented by the dark's accustoming depressing today's love, an illusion of imprisonment minded in my dreams. Unbreakable, the aftermath bond that even you have yet to share. Challenged by temptation, wordless in ability, conditioned by timelessness and a touch that can change Winter into Spring, a presence always in the wanting. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Challenged by temptation, wordless in ability, conditioned by timelessness and a touch that can change Winter into Spring, a presence always in the wanting." LOVED this part! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling at you... and your B word will be? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Karilea, I don't know why...but you made me laugh~~~ thank you both hugs M |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent write! Eric |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
This is very nice M! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I feel this one deeply M don't know why, but I do |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Unbreakable, the aftermath bond that even you have yet to share. temendous awareness...insight and courage....loved this |
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