Open Poetry #34 |
Pie |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Unsilenced are pranks of little jack horner who snatched a deed from a pastry owner plum jam oozed from the corner of his mouth he reminded released black birds to head South? So one ties the song of sixpence with little jack horner's sixth sence custumary to conceal secret notes in pies special crusts baked from the grain of rye If baked blackbirds could at all sing layered by dough then released in Spring what hidden fortunes could crusts then reveal t'was common practice for pies to conceal. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-05-2005 08:35 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for the memory |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The history of our "innocent" childhood ditties, poems, and songs are long ago and ancient acts of thievery, espionage, church and government acts...all hidden in singsong delights to make the children dance... Well done, Sir! Just adding a little link for future reference...by anyone http://www.rhymes.org.uk/ |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
When I am taken back by rhymes, Remember I of all those times. Your cleverness is fun to read, Please give us more of such a deed. Well done! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
...and if I recall correctly...wasn't it..."four and twenty blackbirds baked in a pie"? That was one heck of a BIG pie! But, nothing was unthinkable when we were children. Thankyou for this, hugs, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, enjoyed the spin on this - Susan Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thanks for the memories... I so much enjoyed this one! Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Martin, I enjoyed this so much. ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Karilea appreciate your comment and the link where writers can also seek some inspiration! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martin, Sir... you are MOST welcome, especially since I see you spying spiders! |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Martin, Love this. Brings lots of childhood memories back. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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