Open Poetry #34 |
tambourine heart vibration |
Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
before anyone wants to pull this and hide it away in the never seen again section called "mature" ... i figure i should say ... this is about a kiss... in the rain (the desert took a big hit again today and my mind wanders to this thought, often, when it does.) just thought i'd get that out of the way before hand :-) ~~~~ tambourine heart vibration between the exhale that had been caught & fingertip lilac mist, turning breath to a honeythick velar moan & this tambourine heart vibration 'tween the split of ribs spilling truth a river, of hail found itself upon my back, a layer to plow faith through and you, finding a storm in the hazel of my eyes, 'neath a moon hanging from the eaves, clung 'till earth's red clay palms captured our climb to one another a stain, to linger pressed between a mold of two waiting for the next time you part your fingers through my hair, bringing me open-mouthed to the canyon ... of you 1/4/05©sdt photo©snow of snow "so I wait for you like a lonely house till you will see me again and live in me. Till then my windows ache" p.neruda [This message has been edited by Snow (01-05-2005 12:24 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
even if this was pulled out to mature, I'd go there to read you too |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like the way you describe a kiss!! this rocks... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
With your explanation, it tempers the heat of your words! ~ Mind you, I rather enjoy reading your poem without thinking of your explanation! lol EA |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
as do i (like to post w/out one) ... as for the heat...... *smile* i've nothing more to say. :-) thank you for the wonderful comments! "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hey Snow...love this. Where you been lately? Missing you! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful!!! In the midst of winter, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
tambourine tambourine living reflection from a dream felt absorped in the lifting off from the words |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ohhh boy...this was breath taking....felt my little imaginative friend kissing me.... smiles and hugs...love the pic, how lovely! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I enjoyed this Snow! ^_^ ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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