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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-01-04 08:39 AM



Upon the frozen floor
a prima ballerina
stretches, in
slippers crystal lace,

her trim of crimson
unravelling, dances off
on journeys past,

as the coming
of the solstice
brings the  number's
interchange,

on toes they tip
beneath, the
winter's icey stage,

and rehearse for
spring's recital,
come one late
march matinee

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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2005-01-04 08:56 AM


stage lights
have hands
when your skin is cold
and they are warm

enjoyed this ms inky

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-01-04 09:02 AM



You caught her!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-01-04 09:27 AM


Perfect!!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2005-01-04 10:06 AM


BRAVO!!!!
this is totally cool
keeper

Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2005-01-04 11:41 AM


Stunningly beautiful, dear Michelle. I think you know how hard the work towards the perfection of a performance really is.
It would be great as a didascalia to Degas' paintings.

Love and hugs.
Margherita



*Alli4000*
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The World of Poetry
6 posted 2005-01-04 06:37 PM


  I Love This!!!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

bklynboy
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florida
7 posted 2005-01-05 06:42 AM


Really nice job  
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2005-01-05 07:44 AM


you always touch a place in me
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