Open Poetry #34 |
whisper tree stone |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
would be nice to know the indian of you are your apache tears still the small stones on the earth as buttons tell me of your children mature woman who hides in horse tooth mountain yet wears her hair in gray horizons with feather suns give me of your spirit drink so I may know the small talk of your big woman dancing when her feet are shadows by the drum fire if you have the time to whisper to a tree _______________ _______dark |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
if you have the time to whisper to a tree and does the mantree have the time to listen to her too? and not be watching monday night footfall with his big feet up, burping, and scratching his you know what? well you get the point |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Ok, so do this again, please. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well done sir... as usual... always a pleasure to read you.... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
D - could bury myself in your words and their feel and beauty - mmmmmmmm- so very nice- Gotta laugh though, at the inked one (grin) Hugs - Susan Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
give me of your spirit drink so I may know the small talk of your big woman dancing when her feet are shadows by the drum fire if you have the time to whisper to a tree We should all have the time to whisper to a tree .... Beautiful write! Love, Margherita |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
how quickly thought does travel on vapor clouds of discontent fire shadows dance warm fingers against horse tooth mountains covered in snow raven flies near on silent wing and lands in the branches of her root-bound tree Hmmmm... guess it must be time to go to my drumming circle. Enjoyed this one, D. Indigo |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
so beautiful DS...beki applauds |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very much enjoyed this D. Hugs and smoooches. In the midst of winter, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I liked this one! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you all so much for your read I wish the stone to know each of you and bring warmth to your homes |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enjoying your words today, DS hoping this new year brings you contentment MM |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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