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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-04 08:05 AM


would be nice to know
the indian
of you
are your apache tears
still the small stones
on the earth as buttons

tell me of your children
mature woman who hides
in horse tooth mountain
yet wears her hair
in gray horizons
with feather suns

give me of your spirit drink
so I may know the small talk
of your big woman dancing
when her feet are shadows
by the drum fire
if you have the time

to whisper to a tree
_______________
_______dark

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2005-01-04 08:20 AM


if you have the time

to whisper to a tree


and does the mantree have the time to listen to her too?
and not be watching monday night footfall with his big feet up, burping,  and scratching his you know what?
well you get the point

Elan
Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382
State of Wide Eye
2 posted 2005-01-04 08:27 AM



Ok, so do this again,
please.

Cpat Hair
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

3 posted 2005-01-04 10:09 AM


well done sir... as usual...

always a pleasure to read you....

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-01-04 10:26 AM


D - could bury myself in your words and their feel and beauty - mmmmmmmm- so very nice-

Gotta laugh though, at the inked one (grin)

Hugs - Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2005-01-04 11:21 AM


give me of your spirit drink
so I may know the small talk
of your big woman dancing
when her feet are shadows
by the drum fire
if you have the time

to whisper to a tree



We should all have the time to whisper to a tree ....
Beautiful write!
Love, Margherita

Indigo
Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

6 posted 2005-01-04 12:45 PM


how quickly thought
does travel
on vapor clouds
of discontent

fire shadows dance
warm fingers
against horse tooth mountains
covered in snow

raven flies near
on silent wing
and lands in the branches
of her root-bound tree


Hmmmm... guess it must be time to go to my drumming circle.  Enjoyed this one, D.

Indigo


Beki
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
7 posted 2005-01-04 01:48 PM


so beautiful DS...beki applauds
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
8 posted 2005-01-04 02:07 PM


Very much enjoyed this D.
Hugs and smoooches.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

*Alli4000*
Deputy Moderator 10 Tours
Member Elite
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
9 posted 2005-01-04 06:11 PM


I liked this one!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
10 posted 2005-01-04 06:40 PM


thank you all so much for your read
I wish the stone to know each of you
and bring warmth to your homes

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
11 posted 2005-01-04 08:08 PM


enjoying your words today, DS

hoping this new year brings you contentment

MM

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
12 posted 2005-01-04 11:43 PM


sigh
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