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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-04 07:51 AM



a monday sandwhich
soggy sided sky between
two halves of wet dreams

and they were the spread
that made the tongue want
to whisper til I scream

ice cream melting
and the snow queen will die
unless there is a face to face

sacrifice to her god O
she calls to him loud
but never prays a prayer

repeatable in mixed company
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Dark (scribblenote..dallas raines is a weather reporter in socal..said it wouldn't snow yesterday
so I sat on the beach at surfer's point and asked the drunk taxi man..what is that white stuff on the hillsides..he said ice cream..so see it didn't snow, dallas was right

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Elan
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State of Wide Eye
1 posted 2005-01-04 08:26 AM


ice cream melting
and the snow queen will die
unless there is a face to face

***

Can't you save her?

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2005-01-04 10:28 AM


Ice cream on the hills - how delectable -


Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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Newport Beach, CA, USA
3 posted 2005-01-04 01:56 PM


knowing well Dallas Raines and southern california  I love this! I live at the beach too as you know but drove 30 miles to work today to find Saddleback mountain (alt 2800 ft)covered with snow over half way down from the peak...in 20 years I have seen snow at the tip of Saddleback a handful of times, but never ever before halfway down ( I work at the base). It was a beautiful inspiring site..low clouds hovering near the base...awesome! But definitely NOT typical for us  can't blame dallas for no imagination!

[This message has been edited by Beki (01-04-2005 11:05 PM).]

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
4 posted 2005-01-04 04:24 PM


Elan thanks to you for your eyes here.
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Suzz, you would enjoy the chill
and would bring a tub of warm
with your smile, thanks to you

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ms beki...thanks lady for the eyes
and for looking up at the saddleback

what a sight huh?

and the surfers have frost on
their moustaches too


*Alli4000*
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5 posted 2005-01-04 06:25 PM


I enjoyed this!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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