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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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The rising cost is relative with each heart break forthcoming registering reality going up. Like a deep tissue massage face down on the floor wincing at every pressure point cushions the contempt bruising easily. Stinging like a chemical peel without an ounce of compassion hurts so bad but everyone's been burned setting hearts on fire by the softest touch. Save for the rub, oh love is like a mud wrap warm and penetrating a tangible tingling surfacing naturally glowing with a luster all satiny smooth. Shedding layers at a time like fresh washed terrycloth or crisp cotton sheets wherein lies the pain and pleasure tucked between the folds indulging in the ultimate luxury of loving so deeply hands on. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Both pain and healing rose to the surface in this one, Lori. Enjoyed the read, if not the process involved in the peeling-back reality. PS, typo? massage, or did you intend a different meaning with message? methinks 'message' may be more layered.... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you for your nice reply Kacy girl. My typing skills aren't what they used to be, appreciate you pointing that out. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mmmmm bluzzzy you do peel it so very fine enjoyed this |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, if one thought he or she might be insensitive prior to reading this, they must be feeling the muscled tone now...  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Mmmmm yerself! Thanks for all that, Big Guy~ Glad you stopped by Karilea, I'm going both ways with this. Thank you so much for reading~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a wonderful metaphor... and you've written it so well! *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this write  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey! Great to read you Bluesy girl. Love the write...well done! Hugs~ In the midst of winter, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
suthern, vandana, and Enchantress~ That was so nice of you to stop by and visit. Thank you ladies, very much. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I've virtually stopped participating in PIP these days -- you'll understand I'm sure -- and I may leave for good if things keep heading the way they've been going for me.....but a Lori Serenade, I'll come back for.... yep, every time! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ [This message has been edited by Ratleader (01-04-2005 04:42 PM).] |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write Blues!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yea it's love hurts so good every time and how are you my dear blonde one? |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I understand all too well Ed, but then you knew I would. Chin up, and thank you always for being here for me. Hugging you, Ratleader~ Alli~ Thank you for taking the time to read what I write. I appreciate it so much. Hiya goldielocks~ Yep, it hurts alright, but you gotta love the smooth soothing effect. I swear though, I never thought it would come to this. Take my word for it, chemically enhanced ain't all it's cracked up to be! Love ya Lady~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you did well on this....I never thought of it like that |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I think I should send my soul to a spa and leave the rest of me home. It always feels good to read you. Thanks. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lori, Few write it quite like you do, loving this!! Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ok so now i am ready for a day at the spa loved this....have missed reading you! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hey, you are writing as well as ever...hope your holidays were wonderful!! hugging you, M |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I enjoyed reading this as I have never had a mud wrap, though I can still relate as I know what a pleasure it certainly is to be in love and, unfortunately, I can also relate to the chemical peel. (smiles) Thanks for the mental trip to the spa. -Bob |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This took me back to an incident of being more buried in mud than wrapped in it, but that is another story. It wouldn't hold a candle to yours. It feels good the sense all the touching in this. Thanks for sharing. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hey sweet lady! Have missed you. I am reading more than just a sheer layer on the top of this, I am reading something much much deeper. So very good to read you and hey, here's an extra hug and atta girl for you ok |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Save for the rub, oh love is like a mud wrap warm and penetrating a tangible tingling surfacing naturally glowing with a luster all satiny smooth. First, I am so happy to see you are back here! Second, "Hands On" is a powerful poetic work. Love and hugs, dear Lori! Margherita |
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