Open Poetry #34 |
Of Wasps And Roses -- For Michael Auguste |
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Of Wasps And Roses They’re blooming somehow, why, I’ve no idea. It’s certainly not my doing, in fact I killed them. I didn’t learn in time, and now borers have claimed my roses. Who would have thought a wasp could kill a rose? I pruned them hard and harder when I knew, but too late; the larvae have reached their hearts, and so this summer is their last. Still they blossom, in colors the same but somehow clearer now, as if they knew; as if they made each bud, each leaf, with special care because it could be the only one, a beauty void of hope perhaps but beauty nonetheless. There’s no response, no action I can take. It is a simple thing and I know this fall I can replace them, but some day, if prayers exist or wishes can be answered, I would ask for this: that when the wasp of time plants a final larva in me, I might be given such a gift, the grace to bloom while dying. Reposted....for Michael a kindred spirit with whom I had almost too many things in common, and who became a friend to me, in the nick of time. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful tribute Ed. May his soul soar free. I find myself at a loss for words this first day of the New Year. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some nicks are so danged welcome... thank you for this, Ed. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
So lovely Ed. Thankyou. Chris |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ed, I never knew the man...only that he was beloved. And though I knew him not...I know THIS. That you write truth. Ed |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great tribute Ed! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
i love your choice of words...the piece is evidently heartfelt...well done! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Ed, your words are magnificant....God bless you both... Hugs Lee J. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
as if they knew; as if they made each bud, each leaf, with special care because it could be the only one, a beauty void of hope perhaps but beauty nonetheless. Sorrow... spoken so beautifully. This is a wonderful tribute to one whose season was far too short. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
"In a nick of time" was Michael. Somehow he just knew. Lovely tribute to a caring man. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful tribute Ed Maree into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A wonderful tribute Ed. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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stilltogether Member
since 2004-07-28
Posts 58Georgia, USA |
Thank you so very much Ed. Michael loves it.. I'm sure. Mary It's Not About Age, It's About Life |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ed, this left me wordless. ....jo |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Ed, I remember how impressed I was when I first read this! I'm so glad you posted it again for Michael. miscellanea |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good write |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your writing is straight from the heart, and your heart is a tender one. A lovely tribute, Sir~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed Beautifully done from the heart. Thank you for posting this again! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
came back to say thank you |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
I would ask for this: that when the wasp of time plants a final larva in me, I might be given such a gift, the grace to bloom while dying. ********************************* This poem touched me so...especially this last part. Michael...he definitely bloomed while dying! He was a beautiful soul...and he was made even more beautiful in his passing! I can't wait for the day to see my dear friend again in Paradise! Thank you for posting this!! -- Becka |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
To read this again is to again be touched to the heart... I can't imagine a more beautiful tribute. |
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