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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-01-01 07:43 AM


Her Shadow

Her shadow danced a silver moon
Among the leaves the trees had strewn
Naivety that left a trace
Was woven in my minds embrace

And silver flashed the fires whole
The sight of Eden in her soul
Beckoning my very core
To step into her evermore

I trembled at the silvers light
To step across into the night
For whimsy has a subtle lie
To step across was do or die

When whispers in the sighs of trees
Stilled the rattle of my knees
Stayed the courage of the plunge
And I in madness made the lunge

And ever since the silver moon
Has whispered me a lovers tune.



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1 posted 2005-01-01 07:54 AM



Oh, yes, let her dance...
Happy New Year, our Sy!




Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-01-01 08:20 AM


Sunshine
A good morning and a happy day to you.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-01-01 08:55 AM


wonderful! and dance today I will

good morning Sy

always a pleasure

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2005-01-01 09:04 AM


slip off
a shadow
and do a duet
with your beloved

happy new year

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2005-01-01 09:08 AM


passing,
Then you'll start with a happy new year


inkedgoddess
LOL I did last night.

scorpio
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6 posted 2005-01-01 09:26 AM


A romantic start to 2005 Sy!!  Happy New Year!! And may you dance all year.

believe in what your heart feels...

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7 posted 2005-01-01 09:49 AM


Happy New Years to you and yours Seymour !
Your poem today is a wonderful way to start out 2005. hugs, Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2005-01-01 09:56 AM


Chris,
Hugs and thank you and a good year to you too.

scorpio
Thank you and I think I got a good start.

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9 posted 2005-01-01 02:07 PM


Think I need to give this to my "tumbleweed."  Much enjoyed!
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10 posted 2005-01-01 02:30 PM


just peeking in to say Happy New Years to you and Issybel me sweet Sy-guy.

Randy was a good boy lastnight and only ate a few chips and beer..lol..then he kissed all the girls at midnight.


*ww*

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2005-01-01 04:00 PM


milkweed
LOL good idea, thanks for the read and have a happy year.

JM,
Figured he'd do that. Thanks for the stop bye. We spent a quiet evening last night.
Winkiewinkie

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12 posted 2005-01-01 04:46 PM


Very nice!
Happy New Year Sy!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

LeeJ
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13 posted 2005-01-01 05:16 PM


This entire poem was so loving, so youthful and incredibly sensual....especially liked this:

And silver flashed the fires whole
The sight of Eden in her soul
Beckoning my very core
To step into her evermore


Wow Sy????  Told my brother-in-law over Christmas that he has a twin....you...you wouldn't believe how similar you both look.

Hugs, hope you and yours had a lovely Holiday Season.

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2005-01-01 06:16 PM


Alli,
Thank you, always a pleasure to see you here.

LeeJ,
No matter what the new year will be. With this reply it will be a wonderful year.
Be happy the comming year.
Missed you


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15 posted 2005-01-01 10:52 PM


Hey Seymour...grand poem. Loved it!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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16 posted 2005-01-01 10:59 PM


You can moon me any old time you romantic devil, you!  
Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2005-01-01 11:45 PM


EvocativeVerse2
The pleasure is all mine.

Sharon,
LOL, I may take you up on that.

iliana
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18 posted 2005-01-02 01:25 AM


Now that's love!   .......jo
Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2005-01-02 07:54 AM


iliana
Thank you my friend.

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20 posted 2005-01-02 12:08 PM


How very lovely... and loving! *S* Wishing you a wonderful new year, my friend... hugs to you both! *S*
Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2005-01-02 04:04 PM


suthern
Thanks for the hugs and hugs back.

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