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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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If it all adds up two stay together to cancel losses with computer programmed dates funnel money to washed out causes it all emanates from a website screen thin liquid look invariable at all angles tempts the soul as when a carrot dangles it all adds up one is glued to a screen inexperience knows the colour green a hot date flashes to be seen a tidal wave face is pasted charitable gains orchestrated it adds up on thin atmospheric days invariable as the carrot dangles life plays tricks at all angles [This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-31-2004 08:50 AM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Martin, I enjoyed the play on words throughout this piece. Life does play tricks at all angles! Have a good new year!  ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed very good Martin |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I enjoyed this Martin ... Happy New Year!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Happy New Year to you all and lets show we can all be compassionate in giving to the victims of the underwater earthquake but watch who you give to. |
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