I wrote this reviewed on 5/12 and read it tonight

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Open Poetry #34

I wrote this reviewed on 5/12 and read it tonight

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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0 posted 2004-12-27 07:49 PM

On this manly guise we moved beyond the safe water to stand on the outer skirts of the reef

In the good times we dived

In the bad times we waited

On the night of nights we fought for the strongest to face the wave

On that night when we celebrated

I went early

Dishonest but I wanted to face the wave we knew
In my blood I felt
I must

Lit by flames I raced knowing I could never stop my brother
He matched me on the reef

We waited in our own thoughts
In own desires
We faced
Forces stronger than us

Sunshine

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