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| Open Poetry #34 |
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At the Peak |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA 
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Conversation climbed, hung on cliffs at times. In those dangling moments, two minds intertwined. The mountain slope got steeper and when she thought she’d fall, He dropped a pun for her to grab and lifted up her soul. As she reached the words she sought and put them into place, It felt as if she’d dreamed a spot where lovers often grace. A broadened smile beamed back at her there at mountain’s peak. There was no more a need for words, no more a need to speak. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Jo, I absolutely love this write! It flows beautifully, with ease and grace... and what it says is perfect, too. What a wonderful place to be...  Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Okay Jo - this is way kewl - really enjoy the rhythm and the thought- Hugs -  SusanEvery action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
lily jo, no need for words. I'm simply smiling...  Hugs with lots of love, Linda ~ and may the coming new year be a healing one. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 Yes! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
The mountain slope got steeper and when she thought she’d fall, He dropped a pun for her to grab and lifted up her soul. sounds like you were inspired and given your own wings of flight |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thank you all bunches. Hope your 2005 is filled with many treasured and happy moments.  .....jo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wonderfully written and felt this was encouraging and hopeful could picture you walking off into the sunset together....smiles and hugs |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"There was no more a need for words, no more a need to speak." really enjoyed this!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling wide... I'd always thought a great conversation was like finding a tango partner... I enjoyed your take on it tho, as sometimes, it's more of a climb than a dance. *laughing* and hugs jo jo Enjoyed |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love it! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just as mountains are built on layers, so is this poem, and its intent... Excellent job, Jo, and serenity's comment on on target, too! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Wonderful write, enjoyed. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Much enjoyed iliana. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now how did I miss this? What an incredibly unique and descriptive way to describe a conversation.
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Jo! I also missed this but I'm so glad to have read it now. So very special to reach the point where words aren't necessary. Good write, Jo! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Love it Dave |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Fantastic write Jo! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
When words dance like this and minds intertwine, suddenly there is the perception of such perfect harmony that we stop in awe. Wonderful write, dear Jo. Love, Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
All you wonderful poets, I have greatly missed spending much time with you these past months. Thank you so much for your kind posts and encouragement. .....jo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jo.......Agreeing with Honeybunch up there....very much enjoyed this! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Brilliant. Hanging in, seems tough and then a word seems more than enough. Dave |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I agree. Brilliant, Jo. I had read this before, being impressed. I was shocked to find I had not responded. A keeper indeed! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
smiling at you... this is lovely Jo. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Sometimes a mere word can lead to a silence that is truly golden. Enjoyed POETS AGAINST THE WAR IS REDUNDANT |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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