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Purple Sun
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Purple Sun |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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My mother said to me "look at the moon Juli" An erie illumination so I replied to her "Mother, it is the sun and not the moon." My mother said, "Have you ever seen a purple sun?" I smiled and said "No, I havn't" Then I knew words are words that wasn't the point... Juju |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I really like the depth of this - the concept highlighted - well done Susan Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Interesting, Juju. Happy New Year.  ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I like this Juju . . . Happy New Year!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
was it the moon or the sun? sometimes, it does not matter...what mom says is always right (though we know sometimes, she isn't) love this one |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling with this... my mother use to say, "if I say the sky is green, it's green..." and even though she's gone and I hear myself repeat that story, I also find myself nodding my head... |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I am so glad you guys like my poem. it makes me smile. -Juju |
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