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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-12-30 06:12 PM



It wasn't breast high amidst the corn
On a couch like a summer's morn
You aren’t lying straight
That's your problem
Gardening hurting you
Those daffodils
You stop planting them
You just look at them

Cos boss, I was just only rapping
Them winds are moving the flowers so
You think they'd ask
Before they go
And fall over
So
And the wind was moving them flowers like you asked

What you want pillows for
Bed's there
You'll be sore
Just take the afternoon off sir
Them flowers be there tomorrow
You can see the ducks today
Squire be here
Horse on bay

All these flowers ever do
Is flow in the wind
Like I make my stew

I stir it around
All them colours
Specially when we are making
Them dollars
For your words

So go and have a nap Sir
It's getting a bit breezy
Round the cat, Sir
I'll get dinner ready
We're entertaining
Mrs Easy
And she's deep mining
If not veining

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1 posted 2004-12-30 06:23 PM


sounds like the dreams I've been having lately!
JL
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2 posted 2004-12-30 06:29 PM


Reminds me of summer and mint julep tea,
swatting away flies, while sitting in the cool shade
of a willow tree.

Good one DavePage.

JL


DavePage
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3 posted 2004-12-31 03:52 PM


I think it is more be being a fool, writing nonsense for the fun of it and just letting it flow.

It is a lousy poem but just a bit of fun.

thanks

Dave

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