Open Poetry #34 |
Of Thumb and Plum |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Of Thumb and Plum The nature of the plum that clung A misting essence of a sum Left sweet upon my sense of tongue A thought provoking bygone plum And now it haunts my memories lane With wiles and dreams of other goals It walks the midnight of my sane And lights the shadows in my soul I never thought the consequence Beyond the sweet of taste and done It was an act of impudence A fantasy of over run It swallowed me in mist of time Twisted in my base and core And squeezed the lime of my sublime To hide from me that sense of awe And now I need another life To set the wound and right the strife |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The nature of the plum that clung A misting essence of a sum Left sweet upon my sense of tongue A thought provoking bygone plum ================================== Sy-guy...the word play in that verse alone makes me moth giddy... youre just too kewl for school...now forget those plums and go for the raspberries. LOL *winkiewinkie* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, you've already got mine... and a few more lives, I would think, who wait each morn for thoughts that are born, as they sit reading, from their own life's brink... Good Thursday morning, Sy! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
noddin my head in total agreement to what Kari said.... Enjoyed this muchly Sey guy! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yup what Sunshine said Sy! Morning my friend....have a good day. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, OK I'm all for raspberries, the eating kind. Thank you for the lovely quote. Winkiewinkie Sunshine, Loved your comment. Gentle, You are a love, hugs. Nancy, Tea sounds good the me. Hugs |
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