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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Let Me ~*Marge Tindal*~ Let me be the memory that you retain when the year has ended once again Let me be the memory that you recall back when the we stood for it all~ Let me love you into the new a year of future to pursue Let me also remember, my love, that I was blessed beyond measure after the sigh~ Let me foreverly dwell in that place that can still put a smile upon your face Let me love you like no other could do with deepening love, each day through~ For if you let me I promise that I will love you foreverly or at least ... until you no longer let me~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Marge. how precious |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Reads good to me.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Marge, this is a lovely poem. I am sure it must be for someone very special because it's from someone very special! Hope you had a good Christmas and enjoyed your lovely granddaughters. Happy New Year!  .......jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, there's so much we can do if people allow us to. Nicely written, Marge. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Happy Holidays Marge. This is as beautiful as you my dear. TD |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
For if you let me I promise that I will love you foreverly or at least ... until you no longer let me~ sigh...yes this is exactly how it is Marge... you are a treasure hon. |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Marge this is beautiful. Love, Betty |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yep...love it!!!  |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a great tale! It is so cleansing to recall memories of the year when we are coming to a new one. Well done! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice! Enjoyed. I hope you have a HAPPY NEW YEAR! JL |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yes... how very beautiful! *S* I hope your new year is a happy one, my friend. *S* |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
*smiling* ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: A perfect poem for the ending of one year and the beginning of a new one! May your New Year hold all that your heart desires! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
This just makes me smile. Happy New year to you Marge...I've a feeling that love will continue. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
quite loverly Marge  Hugs - Susan Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all so very much~ Happy New Beginnings to everyone~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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