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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-12-29 11:06 PM



Let Me
~*Marge Tindal*~

Let me be the memory that you retain
when the year has ended once again
Let me be the memory that you recall
back when the we stood for it all~

Let me love you into the new
a year of future to pursue
Let me also remember, my love, that I
was blessed beyond measure after the sigh~

Let me foreverly dwell in that place
that can still put a smile upon your face
Let me love you like no other could do
with deepening love, each day through~

For if you let me
I promise that I will
love you foreverly
or at least ... until
you no longer
let me~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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1 posted 2004-12-29 11:07 PM


oh Marge. how precious
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-12-29 11:08 PM


Marge,
Reads good to me.

iliana
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3 posted 2004-12-30 12:19 PM


Marge, this is a lovely poem.  I am sure it must be for someone very special because it's from someone very special!  Hope you had a good Christmas and enjoyed your lovely granddaughters.  Happy New Year!   .......jo
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4 posted 2004-12-30 12:27 PM


Yes, there's so much we can do if people allow us to.  Nicely written, Marge.
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2004-12-30 07:08 AM


Happy Holidays Marge.
This is as beautiful as you my dear.
TD

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6 posted 2004-12-30 07:23 AM


For if you let me
I promise that I will
love you foreverly
or at least ... until
you no longer
let me~
sigh...yes this is exactly how it is Marge...

you are a treasure hon.

Betty
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7 posted 2004-12-30 08:27 AM


Marge this is beautiful.
Love,
Betty

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8 posted 2004-12-30 08:59 AM


yep...love it!!!
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9 posted 2004-12-30 09:14 AM


This is a great tale!  It is so cleansing to recall memories of the year when we are coming to a new one.  Well done!  Ken

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The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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10 posted 2004-12-30 01:06 PM


Very nice!  Enjoyed.
I hope you have a
HAPPY NEW YEAR!

JL


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11 posted 2004-12-30 02:37 PM


Yes... how very beautiful! *S*

I hope your new year is a happy one, my friend. *S*

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12 posted 2004-12-30 06:16 PM


*smiling*

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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13 posted 2004-12-30 09:28 PM


Dear Marge:

A perfect poem for the ending of one year and the beginning of a new one!  May your New Year hold all that your heart desires!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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14 posted 2004-12-31 01:27 AM


This just makes me smile.
Happy New year to you Marge...
I've a feeling that love will continue.

Always, Alyssa

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...I am a girl of tears.

Susan
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15 posted 2004-12-31 01:32 AM


quite loverly Marge

Hugs - Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2004-12-31 11:10 AM



Thank you all so very much~
Happy New Beginnings to everyone~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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