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Open Poetry #34

Why do I Care

anwaarhassan
Member

since 2003-07-09

Posts 181
Menifee, CA

0 posted 2004-12-29 07:55 PM

I Care

Your silence is so deafening loud
Even when I’m there
Yet never hearing you again
Is more than I can bear.

You look at me through seeing eyes
As if I wasn’t there
Yet never seeing you again
I still must learn to bear.

You walk beside me by yourself
Knowing that I’m there,
Yet the thought of being alone
I simply could not bear.

And when I turn my back on you
With the knife you buried there
You'll rub the salt on open wounds...
Tell me you don't care.

[This message has been edited by anwaarhassan (12-29-2004 10:43 PM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2004-12-29 07:59 PM

wow..I felt these words~~
M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-12-29 10:57 PM

powerful piece

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2005-01-08 02:53 PM

Very powerfull.

Good gutsy writing.

Dave

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2005-01-12 02:14 AM

And that is a cold hard truth, but there's nothing left to do but keep walking.

Be well, fellow poet~

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