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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A quick kiss, a body press then gone, as usual unheard of to be left wondering... just a ghost of thoughts left undone casting shadows on my wall reflecting an emptiness that only you know how to share happy new year~~~~ m |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Bitter sweet, but nicely done. Bob |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this aches Maureen... Hope you have a better new year sweet lady. In the midst of winter, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
what a surprise....Bob... see...what did I tell you  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yep, some of em can do that to you way to darn often. Heres to wishing for the quick body press to go away and the holding hug replaces it for your New Year. Happy New Year from April and I. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Happy New Year to you!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Deeper meaning in this seems to be missed. left undone Dave |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes Dave, a much deeper meaning~~ Thanks for reading M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
umm...shadows... could they only smile back...  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
*sigh* so much left undone, so much... to ponder in coming months |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I so understand this |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Deep emotions in this wonderful write. Enjoyed. JL |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
'A quick kiss, a body press" too quick or not at all..both hurt.  Have a Happy New Year M! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
just a ghost of thoughts left undone casting shadows on my wall reflecting an emptiness that only you know how to share This sounds like my abode... and it makes me want to shed skin as well as shelter... just to know more. *S* Excellent write! |
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