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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-12-29 01:05 PM



A quick kiss, a body press
then gone, as usual
unheard of
to be left wondering...
just a ghost of thoughts
left undone

casting shadows on my wall
reflecting an emptiness
that only you know how to share

happy new year~~~~


m

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RMW
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1 posted 2004-12-29 01:18 PM


Bitter sweet, but nicely done. Bob
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2 posted 2004-12-29 01:20 PM


Oh this aches Maureen...
Hope you have a better new year sweet lady.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2004-12-29 01:20 PM


what a surprise....Bob...
see...what did I tell you  

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2004-12-29 01:39 PM


yep, some of em can do that to you way to darn often.  Heres to wishing for the quick body press to go away and the holding hug replaces it for your New Year.  
Happy New Year from April and I.

*Alli4000*
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5 posted 2004-12-29 06:54 PM


Happy New Year to you!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

DavePage
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6 posted 2004-12-29 07:14 PM


Deeper meaning in this seems to be missed.

left undone


Dave

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2004-12-29 07:16 PM


Yes Dave, a much deeper meaning~~

Thanks for reading

M

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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2004-12-29 08:15 PM


umm...shadows...
could they only smile back...


Midnitesun
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9 posted 2004-12-29 08:26 PM


*sigh*
so much left undone, so much...
to ponder in coming months

passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2004-12-29 10:58 PM


I so understand this
JL
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11 posted 2004-12-30 01:42 PM


Deep emotions in this wonderful write.
Enjoyed.

JL


Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 2004-12-30 01:47 PM


'A quick kiss, a body press"

too quick or not at all..both hurt.



Have a Happy New Year M!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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13 posted 2004-12-30 02:49 PM


just a ghost of thoughts
left undone

casting shadows on my wall
reflecting an emptiness
that only you know how to share

This sounds like my abode... and it makes me want to shed skin as well as shelter... just to know more. *S* Excellent write!

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