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psalm 489 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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shall I committ my sin only four hundred and eighty nine times or go for the gusto of crossing the line would you dare me bare breasted bold to step on your toes when we danced slow with the lights on full I melted your crayons into our soup you looked good too with wax on your mouth when you made kisses on some frosted window with me behind you pretending my poems where whips with ends that didn't bite but only nibbled _____________ dark (gloveless 3) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
gloveless.... is a series I am enjoying... crayon soup... |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Gusto, please.  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Enjoyed this D- you weave so well - but I cannot find #1 S Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . when we choose actions that bring happiness and success to others, the fruit of o |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
insights perhaps? |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
ummm.....on the mark again..wherever you were aiming for, you hit it. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
oh... damn i like this one a lot. "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i want the bite nibbles are for pussy cats |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hehehhe, your a charmer Mr. and say, I double dog dare ya.... Smiles and hugs...good one  Wishing you a very happy 2005!!!!!!! |
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