Open Poetry #34 |
The Turning |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The Turning In turning of the earth from light I pass into my dreams of night Through illusions misty door Into implosions evermore Lost within an endless vie I cannot catch the wind of cry Nor can I steer a true of course Without the knowledge of its source And though I maul the power dun The large and small the all of one I cannot place the small of me Upon the omni that I see And time and space make leap across The echoes of the changing force And I am caught the weave of it An eternity of knit It seems beyond my cope of scope But pray it’s not beyond my hope |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..yea Seymour, always a pleasure to read one of your poems..! sp ------- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Spiros, The pleasure is all mine. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'll arm-wrestle you for whose pleasure it really is, Sy... because you share so very well with all of us... As far as hope goes? You've a soul full of it... and it multiplies daily! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
good morning sir. your always a welcome site |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
"I cannot place the small of me Upon the omni that I see" Sy this line resonates with me so much. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
And time and space make leap across The echoes of the changing force And I am caught the weave of it An eternity of knit Sy, you weave a benefit spell every morning, one of which I plan to invest...thank you dear man.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you dear and may you have the very best of mornings. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful wonderful morning write Sy. Now my day is underway, since I have had my dose of Sy and my tea. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Lost within an endless vie I cannot catch the wind of cry Nor can I steer a true of course Without the knowledge of its source' With lines like this you begin my morning with poetic kiss~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Lovely...seems so daunting, yet so full of hope...just what I needed this gray morning. And time and space make leap across Oh yes! Thank you ~P |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Morning greetings, Dear Poet Ye be not caught in the net of knit, for ye be a weaver of it! Love & Angel Light, EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And time and space make leap across The echoes of the changing force And I am caught the weave of it An eternity of knit It seems beyond my cope of scope But pray it’s not beyond my hope For me, it's one of dreams' finest aspects... that they leap across time and space... those little skips leave me with hope. *S* I enjoyed this very much, my friend. *S* |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I missed this one, Sy...so glad it came back to the top for me to read. It's lovely! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you so much my dear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie You are a sweetheart. |
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