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Open Poetry #34

Like love on a hamburger

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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0 posted 2004-12-28 05:44 PM

Like love on a hamburger
Dreaming of vegetables
He skated on love's thick surface
Greasy at times offering opportunity
High fried and timed
Slick as it seemed at times to be required
Skating as most seemed designed
For what - he had resigned

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
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1 posted 2004-12-28 05:49 PM

Dave,
Your title drew me in! Lots of thoughts skating around in my head after reading this. You always give me a lot to think about. Enjoyed the depth and creativity in this. Wishing you a happy new year,
miscellanea

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-12-28 06:06 PM

Thanks Misc

I did at least keep to just one offering on the menu.

We will eventually move to the middle bit of the car expanded to take the burger box and the coffee.

Automatic robot putting the pinny on and we need know to wear them these days.

Humour apart, just a bit of fun.

Dave

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