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Open Poetry #34

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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 2004-12-28 08:37 AM

so much ugliness
springs from middle of bedroom
no room for loving

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-12-28 08:54 AM

Ow!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2004-12-28 08:55 AM

yes.

and it usually starts with a lie.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2004-12-28 09:24 AM

time then to change the bed...

a lot in the few words...

hugs to you ma'am...

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2004-12-28 09:28 AM

Hopefully there's room for love, if not for loving....

Hard subject to read, harder to say...but said well.

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2004-12-28 09:31 AM

oh Maree, this hit me in the gut
and landed in my heart...

sigh....Hugs to you gal
and you know where to find me
if you should need an ear...HUGS

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2004-12-28 10:56 AM

sure is pretty from this side

but then you are the only one in view

in a room of windows
there are no walls
to hear

enjoyed this displeasure ms

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2004-12-28 06:32 PM

Wow.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2004-12-28 08:58 PM

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