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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2004-12-28 08:37 AM



so much ugliness
springs from middle of bedroom
no room for loving





into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-12-28 08:54 AM



Ow!

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2004-12-28 08:55 AM




yes.

and it usually starts with a lie.

  

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2004-12-28 09:24 AM


time then to change the bed...


a lot in the few words...

hugs to you ma'am...


Ratleader
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4 posted 2004-12-28 09:28 AM


Hopefully there's room for love, if not for loving....

Hard subject to read, harder to say...but said well.

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Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2004-12-28 09:31 AM


oh Maree, this hit me in the gut
and landed in my heart...

sigh....Hugs to you gal
and you know where to find me
if you should need an ear...HUGS

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2004-12-28 10:56 AM


sure is pretty from this side

but then you are the only one in view


in a room of windows
there are no walls
to hear

enjoyed this displeasure ms

*Alli4000*
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7 posted 2004-12-28 06:32 PM


Wow.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Martie
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8 posted 2004-12-28 08:58 PM



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