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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-12-28 03:35 AM

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

1 posted 2004-12-28 04:16 AM

Bravo Snow. I LOVE IT! You have painted for me a moment that is touched with such softness it makes me wish this was my world. They say poetry is an individual thing...but I say the heart of a poet is a communal asset. The poet captures what it is we all experience and gives our feelings voice. I wish just once in my life someone understood these things with me.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2004-12-28 04:19 AM

someone did, kevin

thank you for what you said.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2004-12-28 05:31 AM

I feel wrapped up in this soothing moment of beauty.
Thank you, this is very beautiful!
Love, Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2004-12-28 08:11 AM

ms snow..the water
how does it know
what to keep
what to spend

enjoyed it ms

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2004-12-28 09:01 AM

art.

you are art.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2004-12-28 03:33 PM

"thread you to me"

enthralling phrase!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-12-28 03:35 PM

Exquisite!...Absolutely beautiful!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2004-12-28 06:09 PM

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

9 posted 2004-12-28 06:25 PM

thank you all so much for the comments on this prayer-like piece... they mean a lot to me!!

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2004-12-30 02:37 PM

So, so nice!

JL

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

11 posted 2004-12-31 05:49 AM

ohmygosh! This is sooo beautiful...I am jealous I didn't write it! it is incredible really very very very nice!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2004-12-31 06:24 AM

I so admire the way you do these...how beautiful

I could never even attempt

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

13 posted 2005-01-01 10:58 PM

I know I read this before...know I replied to it before...but I am in a Snow reading mood so back to the top it goes. LOL!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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