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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-12-28 03:35 AM




"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

© Copyright 2004 Snow - All Rights Reserved
EvocativeVerse2
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1 posted 2004-12-28 04:16 AM


Bravo Snow. I LOVE IT! You have painted for me a moment that is touched with such softness it makes me wish this was my world. They say poetry is an individual thing...but I say the heart of a poet is a communal asset. The poet captures what it is we all experience and gives our feelings voice. I wish just once in my life someone understood these things with me.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
2 posted 2004-12-28 04:19 AM


someone did, kevin


thank you for what you said.

Margherita
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3 posted 2004-12-28 05:31 AM


I feel wrapped up in this soothing moment of beauty.
Thank you, this is very beautiful!
Love, Margherita

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2004-12-28 08:11 AM


ms snow..the water
how does it know
what to keep
what to spend

enjoyed it ms

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2004-12-28 09:01 AM


art.

you are art.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

VAS
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6 posted 2004-12-28 03:33 PM


"thread you to me"

enthralling phrase!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2004-12-28 03:35 PM


Exquisite!...Absolutely beautiful!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

*Alli4000*
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8 posted 2004-12-28 06:09 PM




~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
9 posted 2004-12-28 06:25 PM


thank you all so much for the comments on this prayer-like piece... they mean a lot to me!!

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

JL
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10 posted 2004-12-30 02:37 PM


So, so nice!

JL


Beki
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11 posted 2004-12-31 05:49 AM


ohmygosh! This is sooo beautiful...I am jealous I didn't write it! it is incredible really  very very very nice!
passing shadows
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12 posted 2004-12-31 06:24 AM


I so admire the way you do these...how beautiful

I could never even attempt

EvocativeVerse2
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13 posted 2005-01-01 10:58 PM


I know I read this before...know I replied to it before...but I am in a Snow reading mood so back to the top it goes. LOL!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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