Open Poetry #34 |
Burdened |
~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
I grit my teeth and bear the pain, time, and time, and time again. Wearily tiring, worn raw and ill, is a dying spirit with a broken will. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very impressive write, derrick! And as we bear the pain again and again, we come out of the tunnel again and again ... to be born anew ... while light and strength come back. They do! Love, Margherita |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Finish the words Dave |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
day-by-day that's how we climb back up as Dave said, continue... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Dreamchild -- good writing. I hope this new year grants you a lighter load. |
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