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Three Ripples
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Three Ripples |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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I gone without warning tide ebbing beyond despair water’s cleansing wrath II ancient Tsunami angry god in ocean’s form awakened sleeper III dreaming living dreams humanity reminded life’s a fragile thought ©2004 by icebox |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox The clips that I saw were very scary....I used to have a dream as a child of a tidle wave....it scared me then, it scars me now. Well done! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
deep thinking here you've touched me, yes |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"ancient Tsunami angry god in ocean’s form awakened sleeper" All powerful, is Poseidon When he raise up from the sea To probe shore dwellers, with his trident. Truly, he is "an angry god in oceans form" Your compact view of the event is true to your form. Not one word in excess, not one word needed more. ___________ice/ford ><> |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
hideous reminder. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox I'll bet your have allot of these in the old fridg. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
nodding here, I had tried to imagine, and even with my most vivid thoughts in play, I couldn't. one drop at time seems benign, but oh, the power of it, in forces joined. *hard hugs* wise man |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ooh, stay away from that Ripple -- stuff'll rot your innards.... But do keep writing these, because your senryu are getting better and better. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, my, the last one is my absolute favorite!!!POWERFUL**  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Amazing!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ah, yes. And.....to test our humanity, perhaps. ........jo |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
Ice, Excellent write...and so appropriate in light of the recent tragedy in Asia...Well done!! Anwaar |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
it was a very tragic hapenning...a powerful write |
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