Open Poetry #34 |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I am no more than subtle lines drawn real beneath your fingers. I am formless. Given form to know the grace of your caress. Far in the night...your eyes hold stars in the grip of constellations. From distant points of light they gather to your gaze. There is nothing that does not become for you. Ask the stars. Or simply watch me rise to form - In the space beneath your hands. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Eric, First, let me congratulate you. I rarely get around to the discussion area, consequently didn't know that you'd published and were publishing again. I definitely can see why you've made it! Your writing is wonderful. I'll have to check out your book! misc'e |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
soft and beautiful... *smiles* ~tier |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I am no more than subtle lines drawn real beneath your fingers" Seriously outstanding line! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I am no more than subtle lines drawn real beneath your fingers." ~ but of course, I had to read on! ![]() Lovin' hugs, Linda P.S. You are far from "formless"! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ask the stars. ~*~ And you know what, Eric? When I did, they answered back, read more of Eric's works... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Eric - you draw beautiful lines in lovely form - ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write Eric...this is beautiful! ![]() ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Eric Your beautiful words never cease to amaze me. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Eric Writers everywhere offer their thanks, for your words. Dave |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In this pure beauty I dissolve ... Awesome write, dear Eric. I love you. Margherita |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I cannot choose favorite lines from this... I'd be choosing every one... This is superb! |
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