Open Poetry #34 |
Three Oaks |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Christmas lights on all the stores around the square The air is cold and white with snow Cars like sleeping animals parked along the road Children dream of times to come— while parents muse on those that were |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it happens that way, doesn't it? *sigh* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, sounds like Christmas just about anywhere! Very nicely done, John! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
prompts a comforting sigh...love the image of the cars, especially Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Children dream of times to come— while parents muse on those that were" You are quite right you know... well said and much enjoyed. Hugs~ In the midst of winter, |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful! |
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