Open Poetry #34 |
Matters |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wonder Dad, if you understood how so many can view with differing opinions and how your "gone" left them with unanswered questions. For me it never mattered, being the "go-between"..no different yesterday than today. Listening in on our conversation, standing there in the cold, helping your twin, my Aunt, understand why she is still here and you are no longer. It was a hard day...once again, and my privacy with you was not there, as I would have liked. But it made her happy to share her 80th birthday with you and me... and to reacquaint ourselves. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
you are such a kind, caring person.. lets go get a drink/coffee and chat about life.. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
But it made her happy to share her 80th birthday with you and me... and to reacquaint ourselves. that's nice, real nice he must know too |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You're so real, M! ~ as is your poem. I envisioned it ~ I felt it. You truly are a sensitive and caring poetess. Linda |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Missing the 'lost' or 'reclaimed' must weigh a bit heavier on a surviving twin's birthday. The situation is poingant and I can say no more as I'm the father of boy/girl twins and drear enough without dwelling. Enjoyed |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The reqirements of family can be difficult, but, there is a reward for the soul. Gloom |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I could hug you so hard I'm afraid I'd hurt you. Methinks this is a gentle thing tho: |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Maureen, I've sure missed this place and all of you. I talk to my Dad sometimes, too (he left us in 1976). I am sure your Aunt was truly comforted by you being there. I hope your holidays are good ones. .......jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh M |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, I love you for being YOU. I can tell that you are a very loving and caring person and that your family and friends mean a lot to you. You put their feelings before your own, and that is a very beautiful thing to do. I sincerely hope that you have happy holidays. with love and hugs, Ethel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good write |
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