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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-12-22 08:57 AM



There will be
no more storms
to shake upon thee

(you simply cannot glisten
crystal drops for me)

your fingertips
no longer strive
for august constellations

and the driven wind
no longer
whistles toothless
through your hollows
gone

your time has come

something took the
fight right from you

as you stand
now prayerless,
in shoes that marry
to the world
you vowed,
  
i can no longer
make love nor art to you,

somebody please
remove these
haunted memories
that drain
the fertile ground

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-23-2004 08:11 AM).]

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-12-22 08:59 AM


damn....
this haunts..
and hurts...

Brava,
and hugs Michele.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2004-12-22 09:01 AM


poof all gone

does my wand impress you
24 d-cells and a glow light

enjoyed this inky..

ctowen
Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
3 posted 2004-12-22 09:57 AM


Sounds like the need of all the kings horses ... or atleast a prince's stead and a good rope!

        Maybe one last crystal slipper, it would only be fitting.  

                                     *S

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2004-12-22 04:48 PM


So powerful a vision!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

*Alli4000*
Deputy Moderator 10 Tours
Member Elite
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
5 posted 2004-12-22 06:42 PM


"please somebody
take these haunts
of memories that
drain the fertile ground."


Wow.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2004-12-22 09:27 PM




iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
7 posted 2004-12-23 12:55 PM


Perfect, Michele.  Perfection.  

Hope your holiday season is filled with living beauty and happy times.   ....jo

[This message has been edited by iliana (12-24-2004 01:31 AM).]

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