Open Poetry #34 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Time is a window the other side of which helplessly you watch the loved one die |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh* in awe |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
well this is certainly eeri and interesting--gave me goose bumps~~ Atov~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
The truth of this made me angry... so, you did good...emotion provoking indeed. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow. ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
window 1.a hole 2.a frame 3.with paper pane 4.with glass pane 5.open freely 6.fixed-for central air 7. computer window "Time is a window"...which kind? love to read your poem. |
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