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MovesInSilence
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since 2004-03-21
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0 posted 2004-12-22 12:25 PM


Naked, Alone, Silent,
I sit and wait
for the moment
for the day
when the warmth of another
fills the void,
wraps me up,
brings light to my darkness.
This was orginally a picture poem but due to the image just the poem has been posted.

It's not the blindfold that blinds you,
it's the person that puts it there.

© Copyright 2004 Lina - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-12-22 05:33 AM


nicely done
A Tone of Voice
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2 posted 2004-12-22 10:33 AM


Such intense brevity----that conveys the message very well! *S*

~Atov

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
3 posted 2004-12-22 11:13 AM


Loved this! Very well done...

and I love your picture also!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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4 posted 2004-12-22 07:30 PM


Awesome write Melanie!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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