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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-12-21 06:58 PM



The night passes by
and we fail to
notice -

The fullness of the moon,
the crisp bite of
winter
air...

Or the stillness that lies beneath the
rush of crowds.


There is still time.


So I take your hand and we
walk into the night.


This is our present to each other...to
ourselves -

To the night.

We sit...and unwrap it slowly.



© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-12-21 07:01 PM


Never Better.
Happy Holidays to you.
TD

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2 posted 2004-12-21 07:04 PM


Inspirational Eric!
The rebirth of the sun.
The birth of the Son.

     Season's Greetings!

*Alli4000*
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3 posted 2004-12-21 08:04 PM


Very nicely written! Happy Holidays!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-12-21 08:19 PM


sigh
Martie
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5 posted 2004-12-21 11:10 PM


Ericc

It is good to be reminded to slow down...each minute holds something special...thank you.  

Margherita
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6 posted 2004-12-22 04:35 PM


There is still time ...

Thank you for reposting this gem, dear Eric.

It warms my heart.

I love you.
Margherita

iliana
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7 posted 2004-12-22 04:36 PM


I can think of no better present!  Great write!  Happy holidays!   .....jo
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