Open Poetry #34 |
First Bringing together of the Boundaries words |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Boundaries Flying those wings to wing over flights of fancy glinting proud heads with brain muscles powering images of potency imprinting life of life Faint ideas fainting in the mind of dreams you fainted behind flying onto ideas that would change the world echoing dreams of flight to echo thoughts of thoughts hovering over decisions indecision in the challenge to challenge as supported by many you dream of flying alone In a moment’s boundary you threw yourself across the dreams of sand in dreams of thoughts as long boats drift across the early tide brown stretched against a log fiery rim casting sweet colours on a blue crystal water almost transparent in the wake of boats you have never seen You watched and enjoyed the silhouette into the sun with the darkness of failing shadows glistening on heat burning watching crescent heated red hot light grappling to melt inner ore in false images of dancing sharades of prefabricated thought in safety approved steps to falsehood In bodies we saw in a molten fire the broken paths that would not allow our joining as we failed to learn and thus entrapped in atrophy we burnt in a fire of knowledge of realisaton In a mass of freedom echoing boundary hemmed with vision in ignorance we had no boundaries only the chance forward and now we have learnt we have only boundaries to stop us |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"only the chance forward and now we have learnt we have only boundaries to stop us" Concur... JL |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wise words |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks but needs a good rewrite. Dave |
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