Open Poetry #34 |
Infinite & Ours |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Infinite & Ours I watch over flickering eyes in slumber as they follow some inner dream, for I would trail fantasies’ footsteps… Allow me gaze upon these twilight dreams, let them enter, slip easily into my shadows, I would keep all welcome, warm In awe, I glimpse your streaming desires, sensing a soul encapsulating sunlight even in most anxious times perceiving flickers ~ a younger you in count of silver linings, pale golden threads in your hands, even as shadows of failure hover, sounds of echoing laughter of those you have loved, melding with and through inner tidal waves of all you have ever known… and my fingers ache to reach, to touch these dreams in shadows warm, when you wake me with your kiss as eyelids flutter. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Truly an inspiring piece of beauty here. Nicely done Sun...so peaceful, yet softly sensual. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very romantic Sunshine. Loved the last verse especially. TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
echoing laughter of those you have loved, melding with and through inner tidal waves of all you have ever known… A very beautiful write dear Karilea and the above lines are quite touching too. Love, Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"echoing laughter of those you have loved, melding with and through inner tidal waves of all you have ever known… and my fingers ache to reach, to touch these dreams in shadows warm, when you wake me with your kiss as eyelids flutter." This is so very beautiful Karilea... A keeper for my library..thank you. Smiles & Hugs. ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Softly beautiful Karilea Mxx and I am haunted |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooo, nice one |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how smooth, delicate, yet precisely the message is clear....Sunshine....Karilea...you are a master artist... |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a great combination of gentle reveries and a great touch with the waking kiss. Beautiful to read. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A lovely beauty Kari....thats one awesome pic gal.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea How beautifully romantic....you have such a soft touch! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
This really speaks to me. I enjoyed the brief visit before lunch break ends in about thirty seconds! Have a great day! misc'e |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This is so nice. Wonderful poetry! JL |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
truly excellent... regards sudhir |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May his kiss continue to make your eyelids flutter! Lovely as lovely gets! Linda |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sunshine -- What an intimate, lovely piece! Much enjoyed. .....jo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
romantic and dreamy.... loved it. Billy 8) "If at first an idea is not absurd, there is no hope for it." |
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