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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2004-12-18 05:15 PM



A little philosophical second love ditty I've been working on.
You tell me - I should forget her
And I say - I'd like nothing better
But there's always history can't change that
I'm talking bout the past
You know how long forever lasts
Before we became one

Chorus:
There was another you
Another love you knew
Someone touched you in the night
Someone special held you tight
And there were hopes and dreams
Laughter made from future schemes
Long before me & you
There was love you thought was true
So let the love we share today
save both of us from yesterday


I could say - I'll never leave you
You could say - I'll always be true
Well I been round before
This time it feels so good I'm sure
But I'll say it once more
Before we were one

Chorus:
There was another you
Another love you knew
Someone touched you in the night
Someone special held you tight
And there were hopes and dreams
Laughter made from future schemes
Long before me & you
There was love you thought was true
So let the love we share today
save both of us from yesterday

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

© Copyright 2004 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2004-12-18 05:40 PM


Beautiful song!

Love in the Now is what you have got. And that's a precious gift. Yesterday is gone.

Love, Margherita

DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-12-18 05:48 PM


Excellent mate.   The touch is fine.

Dave

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-12-18 09:43 PM


sweetly sung
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