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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you said you would wear the gauze there at our hedenism eden where the sun would know our names from hearing us shout above the sea voice loud and you would wear my eyes there at our mountain retreat where the foot prints in snow went in circles around to our bungalow again and you would wear my thoughts too at our cove of dreams down at malibu under the cliffs on vista beach where only lovers are allowed and you would wear my saliva on your lips there on vine and the corner of hollywood at noon when the crowds came just to see our love live you said you would just wear me.... out ______________ dark |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 nice |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Reminds me of a McKuen poem... only better...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh yes... beautiful picture. much enjoyed D.. and good morning. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you said you would just wear me.... out"  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Warm chuckle and sinful delights here - mmmmmm D - you paint a seductive picture - Like SEA says -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and you would wear my saliva on your lips there on vine and the corner of hollywood at noon when the crowds came just to see our love live you give just so much, then make us do a double take, like in lyrics we thought we heard, but did'nt or did we? well anyhow, youre guilty of always being one toke over the line , or is it one toke under the line??????? well have a toke on me, either way or should i have one on you? |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Dark,Very nice write! Enjoyed this very much!! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
McKuen couldn't have said it better....or done it with such...shall we say...vigor...(wink) Smiles and hugs...enjoyed |
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