Open Poetry #34 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you heard a song there while driving home said it was us playing then getting serious too made you think of waves later when you were on our island and I was on that rock watching your skin do things to the sun making it hotter you asked me after if I could feel you wearing my skin over yours like a lover's jacket you looked at my eyes for answers so I closed them and made you listen to the touch of my kiss ________________ Dark |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
::damn thought i saw tan lines, just then...:: lol tight spill, Dark-ness **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you looked at my eyes for answers so I closed them and made you listen to the touch of my kiss YES!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, let's kick-start Friday whydon'tcha? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"you looked at my eyes for answers so I closed them and made you listen to the touch of my kiss" WOW...and WOW again!! Good Morning Dark!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely written |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you looked at my eyes for answers so I closed them and made you listen to the touch of my kiss" yep..this part did it for me too....*SIGH* perfection.... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmm - to be wrapped in the cloak of darkness and feel the play of the shadows - as they open to the piercing of the sun - Morning D - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
you looked at my eyes for answers so I closed them and made you listen Love the sound of rolling waves you write...Meester~ Happy Holidays 2you, Dark Stranger~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and all else was forgotten Lovely prose Mr. Happy and Lovely Christmas to you |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"you looked at my eyes for answers so I closed them and made you listen to the touch of my kiss" It is actually scary that you write those lines, as just yesterday I had a very similar conversation with a friend... Too weird... and you put it into such lovely words.... Happy Holidays D! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write! Happy Holidays! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i enjoyed this My spirit will rise |
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