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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-12-17 08:02 AM

you heard a song there
while driving home
said it was us
playing

then getting serious too
made you think of waves
later
when you were on our island

and I was on that rock
watching your skin
do things to the sun
making it hotter

you asked me after
if I could feel you
wearing my skin over yours
like a lover's jacket

you looked at my eyes
for answers
so I closed them
and made you listen

to the touch of my kiss

________________

Dark

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

1 posted 2004-12-17 08:14 AM

::damn

thought i saw tan lines, just then...::

lol

tight spill, Dark-ness

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-12-17 08:17 AM

you looked at my eyes
for answers
so I closed them
and made you listen

to the touch of my kiss

YES!!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-12-17 08:32 AM

Oh, let's kick-start Friday
whydon'tcha?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-12-17 08:40 AM

"you looked at my eyes
for answers
so I closed them
and made you listen

to the touch of my kiss"

WOW...and WOW again!!
Good Morning Dark!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-12-17 09:06 AM

nicely written

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2004-12-17 09:18 AM

"you looked at my eyes
for answers
so I closed them
and made you listen

to the touch of my kiss"

yep..this part did it for me too....*SIGH* perfection....

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-12-17 10:16 AM

Mmmm - to be wrapped in the cloak of darkness and feel the play of the shadows - as they open to the piercing of the sun -

Morning D -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2004-12-21 03:26 AM

you looked at my eyes
for answers
so I closed them
and made you listen

Love the sound of rolling waves you write...Meester~

Happy Holidays 2you, Dark Stranger~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2004-12-21 07:19 AM

and all else was forgotten
Lovely prose Mr.

Happy and Lovely Christmas to you

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

10 posted 2004-12-21 08:07 AM

"you looked at my eyes
for answers
so I closed them
and made you listen

to the touch of my kiss"

It is actually scary that you write those lines, as just yesterday I had a very similar conversation with a friend...

Too weird...

and you put it into such lovely words....

Happy Holidays D!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

11 posted 2004-12-21 07:07 PM

Great write! Happy Holidays!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

12 posted 2006-08-22 12:12 PM

i enjoyed this

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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