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You are called love |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I write in themes at a time and keep it all for years I suppose, for at that time it was maybe too raw in my mind and if I stop to work each one out nothing gets written so I mind dump and work on them as individual poems until I hit the right frame of mind and they come together. Often you will see a poem from me that have elements you have seen as poems in their own right. I cant claim this is more than another journey in words. Dave **************************************** Flittering lace you flitter a spectrum of movable colour emphasising Some inner sense why Within your head demanding obscurity for ignorance of your mind Echoing colour you desire Unmoving controlling absurdity beckoning You flutter your life A canvas of hearts Beckoning parts Headless Of desire Dancing body by body Silk by silk Movement by movement Head by head Hair by mouth Smell of want Electric insatiable desire I look into your face I look into your eyes Your eyes shine to me Your lips are wet My tongue is dry I look at the black behind you The wind gently moves your hair Your eyes deep like moons The trees bow for you As you move Your dress is light It moves with your body My heart clings to my words I look into your eyes And see nothing The beach is hot The water cold We miss lunch I drink too much You watch everything The trees are bare No leaves anywhere I look for your eyes The birch is silver I shiver I look into a station I see you On vacation I wash in the rain Your tempest rules again Your voice is lost in the night For all to see And freedom was its gift to me In my heart magic sparkling eyes wept In my mind a clock strove to chime Alarms to bring nature to reality Tried by time Sentenced by cowardice Executed by fear And escape I face you on a bad day I face the green For you have the life I come to you to bring me life I sit before you have the time I await the wind, the cleansing rhyme I face you, as I should With the wind crescendo I face you No one in this life knows Your innermost thoughts You are to them A game For me You bring a feeling of strength You bring the past You tell me of the future You give me peace at last You are called love And like a hungry man I dream of my repast |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"No one in this life knows Your innermost thoughts You are to them A game For me You bring a feeling of strength You bring the past You tell me of the future You give me peace at last You are called love And like a hungry man I dream of my repast" Wonderful write Dave.... Very much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, Dave, a most enjoyable and meaningful write! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks It works on if only I could pay off the mortgage, get rid of the debts and spend my life on poetry. Reality doesn't allow that, and I am sorry in a way that words I write end up getting crushed or left but maybe they weren't right and maybe I need to develop so they display the vision I felt I had when I wrote them. In the meantime life goes on for those lucky enough and I always thank Piptalk for allowing me to write. In the UK I would not have the freedom to write and interact as we do. regards Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad you're here Dave |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and a wonderful vision at that Immensly beautiful David, thank you for sharing |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Simply beautiful, dear Dave. Highly enjoyed. Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
passing shadows Thanks Dave LeeJ Thanks Lee dave Margherita Yes those two version do blend together better than I have done. I will print this out and look at how it interacts. thanks Dave JamesMichael Thanks James Dave |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i have missed reading your wise words  My spirit will rise |
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