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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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She brought shimmering stars to eyes, willowy winds to my face. A murmur of sigh to my cries...and boundless grace. A torrid rush of passions flood and tears that mingled in. A warm coursing of my blood, a penchant to win. A summer’s breeze to my locks, where swirls caught my view...a lapping wave at the docks...as journeys renew. She came of a zephyr, fluttering on wings. Wanderlust pushed her, her goal was all things. Living in dreams of soft cotton and gold, wading pure streams...a warm hand to hold. She brought the night to my bed, a touch to my head....A warm touch with a tip, a dampness of lip. A song that erased all pain that I feel, wisdom and grace...of things real or surreal. She touched a star at the core, sailed a comet in view. She was the knock of my door.... before she fluttered and flew. And when the shadows return to the window on high....rest assured I have learned...to just wait and rely...on the dreams that shall bring abundance to me...as my angel does sing... ever passionately. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Barry, this is magical! You listen to the wonderful song of your Angel and the message in itself is abundance. Love, Margherita  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Barry this is so extremely enchanting. Wonderful, delightful write sir. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Barry - this makes me think of the wind. Perhaps not what you had in mind, but to me, she could do all these things - including bringing dreams - I like this thought - Hugs you - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enchantingly beautiful Barry! Love this piece! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, SHE is something else! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ I heard the faintest whispering cry of her leave-taking~ Lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
as the country song goes.... I like it I love it Give me more of it. :-) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
An angel for an angel!  EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful...oh you weaver of words...how lovely! thank you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Magical, enchanting, beautiful, I like it... I'll just borrow from others... they read my mind. *S* Excellent! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry So very spirit blessed and beautiful! |
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