Open Poetry #34 |
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Gaudeamus Igitur ! Pereat Tristitia! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533![]() |
Congratulations Amanda Cosette, college graduate! (a semester early) . . . . . . I named the little bird Cosette If birds can find a foothold in the air where lumb’ring beasts see only infinite (but still will blink their dreams and prayers’ there) then I must ask who owns more lucid sight? If birds, so timid, fragile, fear not heights while brutish boors bang bones upon the ground, then I must ask whose view’s in better light, the one who’s free in flight or shadow bound? If birds can grace us with their perfect sounds tho’ hounded by the hunters’ horn and snare, then I must ask by which we are astound the clamorous and common or the rare? Fly! Fly Bird for you there is no limit! The light is yours! Soar there! Let no one dim it! . . . . ![]() . . vinco totus astrum . . . This Child (with a nod to Ms. Plath) . My eyes, dry, wrest of pesky nothings, muse the brilliant lodestar’s path so clear from here. Your names we let you keep (and would have forever) ‘doordut’ was donut, ‘magitch,’ Magic I (yes, yes……We) filled you with tint and hue, music and much laughter This patched canopy, in salvo’s of applause bounds in gusto and heralds your aurora! . . . . . . ……………. http://www.breakoutofthebox.com/child.htm |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
Congradulations! nice write! Merry Christmas! LOR you're the only one keeping me alive |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
poor sylvia, never saw her little birds fly my my how handsome we are the young babydaddy looks good on you |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Thanks, what a nice thing to say. Here's dad and the grad a few months later when I shaved, left waiting tables and got a "real" job and 'daddied' 3 more in the next 45 months. ![]() . . and the preemie, pride when she played violin in an adult orchestra at 15. . . . ![]() . . . . I barely got out of high school. . . . Yes that was one of poor Sylvia's suicide notes. She only saw her own depressed 'ceiling' reflect from her children's eyes/futures and thought them better off without her. This was the answer from one who stuck it out on this plain and is damn glad. (pictures of me are rare, children in the hundreds for I was always the photographer) |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling at the write, the pictures, and understanding the pride and love. Thank you so much for sharing these! It is sad that Ms Plath did not stick around to get past her own negative self-assessment. ![]() |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
o yes, i am quite sure you broke many a heart ![]() |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Richard Thank you for sharing so much here...I am touched by your words and the photos...thank you. ![]() |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Congratulations to your Cosette, and may she always fly free to find her dreams realized. What a lovely picture of her - and what a fabulous accomplishment. Talent seems to run in the family, and brains (wow a year early - good for her!) Nice poems dedicated to her that I am sure she will always treasure as well as this graduation day. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
RSWELLS: Not only do you write wonderful words amd thoughts,you send us searching to other sites to learn. I have learned so much more by where you send us.I wondered how you knew of Slyvia Plath. I guess I though of her as a women's poet. But your self revealing and sharing have opened my mind. best marty |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You have blessed us with your reasons for smiles... Now, let me find my box of Kleenex... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is so extremely special and I thank you for sharing it with us. I am so very glad that you are gracing these pages of blue with your words and insight again. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I usually don't click on titles that I can't understand, but I'm glad I was curious about this one |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Congratulations to Amanda, and Richard, this truly is a very touching write... Kari? wanna hand over some kleenex..please. adding this to my library. Maree ![]() into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How wonderful this is! Love the pics as well as the words. Congratulations to your Cosette! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This whole thread has me choked up! The photos ~ the sentiments ~ the poetry ~ the comments! I truly thank you for sharing you and your family with us! Congratulations and a big hug to your Cosette! ![]() Love & Light, Linda |
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