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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2004-12-16 07:41 PM

I want to know you
in moments unscripted
when your eyes speak to me
the desires of
your heart

I want to feel you
in dreams unexpected
and find the texture of your love
genuine

I want to hear you
in the silence of too many voices, unmistakable
tingle me then
as only you can
when you say my name

I want to love you
with emotions unrestrained
with all the passion
you never knew
was always there
and was always
yours

~SEA~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2004-12-16 07:44 PM

As only you can do, I'm sure! Nice SEA.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-12-16 08:07 PM

Breathtaking Sue! Absolutely beautiful.
I especially love the second stanza.
Holiday hugs to you!

Season's Greetings!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2004-12-16 08:34 PM

One of my favorites...James

silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

4 posted 2004-12-16 08:35 PM

this is great! i loved this

LOR

you're the only one keeping me alive

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-12-16 09:35 PM

awesomely gorgeous!

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2004-12-17 02:07 AM

Now was that elegant or what for a tatoo lady

Just beautiful m'friend, and Happy Holidays to you, your Mom, and the tribe.

Let there be peace on earth ~ and let it begin with me

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

7 posted 2004-12-17 03:02 AM

ok, when do we start.

Great write. sweet one. In all the time i've been away everyone is so much better.

This was a wonderful read.

Parker

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2004-12-17 07:53 AM

ms sea..
bring a lunch?

(grin)

lovley work ms

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2004-12-17 08:49 AM

I want to love you
with emotions unrestrained

~*~

Yes, Susan...
that is indeed the only
way to dance...

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

10 posted 2004-12-17 06:03 PM

Good write Sue...amazing!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

11 posted 2004-12-17 09:31 PM

I want to know you
in moments unscripted
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I wish I had wrote that line!!!

I want to hear you
in the silence of too many voices, unmistakable
tingle me then
as only you can
when you say my name

OH YEAH...
SAY MY NAME BABY!!!

hehe

Exquisitely SEA poetry.

coyote
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

12 posted 2004-12-17 10:14 PM

If poetry is about "the line and the song", this is truly poetry.

Beautiful words, SEA.

Billy 8)

"If at first an idea is not absurd, there is no hope for it."
Albert Einstein

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

13 posted 2004-12-18 12:12 PM

Delicious. I can taste these words like cotton candy ...mmmmmmm... They melt in my mouth. -Bob

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

14 posted 2004-12-18 03:23 PM

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

15 posted 2004-12-18 10:48 PM

Such lovely desires painted pretty -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

16 posted 2004-12-18 11:09 PM

Very sweet write SEA. Happy Holidays!
hugs, Chris

Don't forget my presents!!

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

17 posted 2004-12-18 11:29 PM

I want to know you
in moments unscripted

I want to feel you
in dreams unexpected

I want to hear you
in the silence of too many voices

I want to love you
with emotions unrestrained

I too want all this...really really beautiful SEA.

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

18 posted 2004-12-20 01:38 PM

'I want to feel you
in dreams unexpected
and find the texture of your love
genuine"

That would be perfection..

Lovely Susan.

Happy Holidays.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

19 posted 2004-12-20 03:19 PM

I feel this poem and I love it. Have a great holiday!!!

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

20 posted 2004-12-20 03:33 PM

sometimes... you just make me :

:

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

21 posted 2004-12-20 04:48 PM

nice read

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

22 posted 2004-12-21 01:58 PM

Beautiful work... I like this very much! *S*

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

23 posted 2004-12-22 11:56 AM

I just wanted to say thank you to you all...very much...

your kind words mean a lot to me!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

24 posted 2004-12-22 07:24 PM

Keep going...James

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