Open Poetry #34 |
Ethereal Criminal (scene 14) |
Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
Shadow Shrouded Thief of bodies sneaking past living eyes to a vessel unprotected comandeering skin of the ignorant all in vengence to fulfill forlorn earthly desires chorus Ethereal Criminal Warn all that you can for the one in my skin the fire behind my eyes is no form of me. Sudden jerk of all soul ties falling to feet of the unwatchful living a tresspasser taking an empty cadaver for his own bridge [sing in quarter note triplet build] I should have followed your pain trail back into the darkness am i to blame? your action, reaction all revenge ruining my world in the name of yours Your time passes too quickly through my hourglass chorus ethereal criminal warn all that you can for the one in my skin the fire behind my eyes is no form of me nice use of muffin |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent! Eric |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
thanks for dropping in and commenting. always appreciated -John nice use of muffin |
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