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Halcyon (Frances V)
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Halcyon (Frances V) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Daisy chains and lemonade passing notes of secret code tangled toss of legs engraved in clover where the stadium was painted on a sign "to be" I watched the sun pass through her hair wondering if she knew that it captured honey liquidless telling time that tells too much. "sssssshhhhhhhhh, the bell's about to ring" she wondered how I always knew not knowing that her eyes wrote rhyme how in the morning, sparkled dew (as though an elf in merriment) and how the layers of her tress warned me of the sun's duress passing days away... "I guess -" I was so uncomfortable, telling her how close I watched-- the way her lip would curl up slight and how she held my fingers tight when we passed the gossip crew I guess I am in love with you words I never said, instead I offered her a buttercup, asking if she told the truth laughing when she sneezed I knew that I might never know. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
not knowing that her eyes wrote rhyme how in the morning, sparkled dew (as though an elf in merriment) and how the layers of her tress warned me of the sun's duress passing days away... ~*~ I guess you are ever right in your ever writing.... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yanno, I can see you with one of those familiar buttercups like offering a pat of soft buttery sunlight |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"she wondered how I always knew not knowing that her eyes wrote rhyme how in the morning, sparkled dew (as though an elf in merriment) and how the layers of her tress warned me of the sun's duress passing days away... "I guess -" Beautiful....and in wonderful rhyme. Hugs YOU! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Don't forget my presents!! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Daisy chains... do girls still do that? *smiling* love ya Karen. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
she wondered how I always knew not knowing that her eyes wrote rhyme how in the morning, sparkled dew (as though an elf in merriment) and how the layers of her tress warned me of the sun's duress passing days away... "I guess -" I was so uncomfortable, telling her how close I watched-- I bet you didn't have to...she knew. Keep em a comin M'lady  Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful write! Eric |
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