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Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-12-15 03:27 PM

come to me
lay your wounds before me
i will bathe them with tears of compassion
dry them with the soft of my hair
heal the ache of them

let your broken pieces fall
together we shall lift them
my love shall bind them
my kisses seal the seams
until you are whole again

come to me
i need only to be needed
to give of my bounty
to spend of my tender
and redeem of my giving
through the blush of your love

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-12-15 03:28 PM

oh how exquisite this is! Beautiful writing Susan.

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

2 posted 2004-12-15 03:32 PM

Classique! Il est très sensuel.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2004-12-15 03:38 PM

This is going straight into my library... Wonderful write... yes! *S*

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-12-15 03:40 PM

Very very beautiful Susan!!
Lovely love indeed!
Hugs!

Season's Greetings!

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

5 posted 2004-12-15 03:55 PM

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come to me
lay your wounds before me
i will bathe them with tears of compassion
dry them with the soft of my hair
heal the ache of them

wonderful, Susan!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-12-15 07:47 PM

Thank you my friends - for your gift of replies and your kind hearts -

Hugs -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2004-12-15 11:51 PM

A joy to read...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-12-16 05:21 AM

you are tender

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2004-12-16 07:34 AM

shall I cut my skin
with your blades
to make new wounds
to gather of your compassion

will you lend me
your sharp edges
then surround me
with the soft

of your solution?

kewl stuff suzzz
I hate it though
when you write love words
to Santa

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2004-12-16 07:56 AM

very much enjoyed this passionate read...it is much more, than any man could ever hope for...

Giggling at Darks reply about Santa....

thank you for sharing

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

11 posted 2004-12-16 10:51 AM

Morning hugs and thanks to you all, my friends.

Yep - got the tenders for Santa Baby - Dark-just hopin' he'll bring me my Jag this year

- Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

12 posted 2004-12-16 02:47 PM

Your words are beautiful Susan.

I used a translation for your subject.

"Come leave me to like you" was the translation.

Very interesting.

Dave

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

13 posted 2004-12-16 02:49 PM

Dave - it should have read "come let me love you" hehe - guess from English to French is different than from French to English

Thanks for you kindness -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

14 posted 2004-12-16 04:12 PM

Wow...!!!!!

Eric

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

15 posted 2005-01-04 08:06 PM

This one is beautiful.

:-)

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

16 posted 2005-01-04 09:27 PM

Eric - thank you for your wow - it says a lot to me -

Froggy - thank you so much for your beautiful, it too warms my heart -

Hugs - Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

ParisGrl
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

17 posted 2005-01-06 02:32 PM

Susan,

I love this poem! Magnifique! It expresses exactly the way I feel about a certain someone.

~Laura~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

18 posted 2005-01-06 02:40 PM

Who could resist after such tender and passionate invitation?

Tu sais aimer!

Bisous.
Margherita

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

19 posted 2005-01-06 02:59 PM

Thank you for your warm replies, my friends -

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

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