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Open Poetry #34

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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2004-10-23 08:00 PM

Wind chimes wobble wickedly in wait of wanton witchery,
while windows weep and wondrously write a silken symphony.

Turtles trail the cottontail and take their time to no avail.
As doves do dart in winged flail and ships undock and slip their sail.

Clocks do count the current tick and stars do shine before the wick,
as wax does wane and whisk away while siblings sift the silken hay.

And as the moon does make the moor upon the sip of soup de jour
a mother scrubs soft skin to squeak before the soapy scent does sneak.

And if you think I can contrive some more that makes you feel alive
I have to find my dancing shoes and sneak a song of soft shoe blues.

For our resident moth....who loves the wordplay...

[This message has been edited by Magnus (10-23-2004 08:53 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-10-23 08:35 PM

Libations for the soul here.
Many of the most powerful of senses played nicely together on this page.
Scribed so well, in Magnus fashion.
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-10-23 09:24 PM

very cool write

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2004-10-23 09:51 PM

great!

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2004-10-24 12:30 PM

Oh....very Barry...I like too!!!!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-10-24 01:17 AM

I could see where she would be absolutely delighted as this is delightful-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

6 posted 2004-10-24 11:52 AM

This is great fun, Magnus!

Corinne

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2004-10-24 11:57 AM

good poem

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