Open Poetry #34 |
In Progress |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
In Progress Thoughts are intertwined within the shadows of a smile. "A Work in Progress" say I, titled just for you. They come and go, some dark, some light, all aware of tomorrow and the unconditional. Those final acts of life, arrest me in sorrow pitting the passion against such, a change of seasons there to confuse. But I feel your whispers stranding me in temptation, your warmth upon my heart sometimes playing hide and seek but always winning out. I am challenged by the new, the old beginning to shed its hold, finally. You are and I am... Between the lines. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yea, i could feel the grey areas, that feeling of hesitation , reservation and just treading lightly.......its a dance, isn't it? always a dance liked this much |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"A work in progress" how aptly put. Good to read that acceptance is in your mind. Closure is a wonderful thing when it finally comes along and I wish you the best with it all. Although I hope it never diminishes your wonderful muse. Eric |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
But I feel your whispers stranding me in temptation, your warmth upon my heart sometimes playing hide and seek but always winning out. powerful writing girl! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"They come and go, some dark, some light, all aware of tomorrow and the unconditional" So very true. you did good! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Understanding this all too well... Excellent write M. Hugs~Nancy Season's Greetings! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
A lovely piece of mystery here. Real look at life. Excellent meanings hidden behind the words. Dave A knowledge of inner strength and when you have that strength then the whispers of those who lack that strength. I am challenged by the new, the old beginning to shed its hold, finally. You are and I am... Between the lines. M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so good at the endings, we are |
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